Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Lost Friend

Now when you are gone I feel the emptiness within me that can’t be filled.
No replacement I found.
All I ever wanted was you to stay next to me but now you are gone.
Gone and left me alone.
Alone in this cruel world which feels nothing.
People call me crazy and I know it true but who's to blame.
They are right.
Cause I found a diamond which was as soft and smooth as there wine.

They say that it's not possible but I say it was but now it's gone.
I can't prove it nor can the divine.
Oh God you should have been merciful on me and gave him extra life cause this is real life game and not some game from mad persons mind.
Look at his mother she is left with memories.
Memories that once made her laugh are now making her cry.
Look at his father he has grown old now with no shoulder to support or to cry on.
Look at the people who were there with him on his final journey, are left with unspoken words.
Even I had so much to say but you gave me no time.
You went like a super jet into the sky.
I wanted to pause but the remote was lost.
So I could not do anything except to stand and watch while you said goodbye.


  1. Just thought i would change my old ways of not commenting and say hello. Been around for awhile and have loved your posts

  2. loved the simple and lucid way in which you have put across the pain of losing a close one n also the way in which u have coupled it with a light and soft rhyming...nice one ashwin :)

  3. This one is amazing.. :)

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