Thursday, August 9, 2012

Can't Take It Anymore


 









She looks beautiful when she pose
Though she got a big nose
I hate to tell her
That I can't be with her anymore.

I loved her to the core
Gave her what she ever thought for
Shared her tears, made her cheer
But is this what I get, I don't know
I can't take it anymore.

Me leaving her makes me sad
But I guess this is how it is to end
She be happy all her life
That’s what I prayed for.

Maybe when I will not be around
She might realize what I gave her
She might try to search for me
But I’ll be no where to be found.

This is the time for goodbye
Time for final prayer that I guess would be heard
God forgive me as I ask
Not for me but for her.


210 comments:

  1. Aww. This is a heart breaking one :"( What happened? By the way, be strong! It's a good poem. Heart touching one. Keep it up!

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  28. It's so nice to see people writing with the heart. Cheer up though ;)

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    1. thanks a lot for visiting my blog and yes few poems are based on what has happened with me and some are on situations that i came to know..

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  71. Thank you for your comment!
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  83. loved! such a beautiful (and kind of sad) poem!
    xoxo sweetheart

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