Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Black or Green

Sky is high
Ocean is deep
Where is my dam phone
I can hear it beep.

Crow is black
Parrot is green
If you open your eyes
You can see.

He said you are right
And I am wrong
Can anyone tell
What I feel.

Some people go to Houston
Some people go to London
Where should I go
Where would I get the cream.

Her nose is long
Her hair are short
What color should she wear
Is it black or green.

29 comments:

  1. hahahahha i am so gonna kill u ashwin singh for 1 line in dis.... but overall its good...

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  2. hahahaah nice one ashwin but whats the exact theme of the poem???? is it ur phone or this lady's big nose??? :) :)

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  3. Iha Jain thanks for the comment....he he he......

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  4. Tickled Pink it is a total timepass .. even I dont know what it is about.....

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  5. Thanks for your lovely comment! And congrats, you are a talented writer I think!
    If u want we can follow each other with Google Friend Connect! Let me know
    http://namelessfashionblog.blogspot.it/
    http://www.facebook.com/NamelessFashionBlog

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  6. Great post !

    Love your poem when you write one for me ? :)


    Thank you so much for your comment and You got yourself a new stalker !!

    Please feel free to check out my blog if you have the time

    Love,

    Janice
    the-fashion-milkshake.blogspot.nl

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  7. Hey sweetie,
    Thank you so much for comment.
    Did you write it on your own?
    It's beautiful. I feel so free reading this, you know.
    Do you want to follow each other?
    http://coeursdefoxes.blogspot.com/
    X

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  8. cool post!!thanks so much for commenting on my blog, I was wondering if you would like to follow each other..just let me know on my blog!!:)

    nishalooks.blogspot.com

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  9. @Nameless Fashion Blog....
    Thanks to you too for your lovely comment. I have started following your blog also...Thanks once again and hope to see you back soon...

    Regards,
    poetashwin

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  10. @The Fashion Milkshake/Janice....
    Thanks for your comment... checked your blog... it is beautiful... and would write one for you soon...

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  11. @Katie Frank.....
    Hey,
    Thanks to you too for your comment.
    Yes I wrote them all on my own.
    No copy paste work..
    I am already following your blog...Check more poems... you would like them also.....

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  12. @Nisha...
    Thanks for visiting my blog and for your comment....Already following you dear...
    :))

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  13. sure, let's follow each other:) follow you!

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  14. Nice blog.
    xo.
    http://fromhatstoheels.blogspot.nl/

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  15. follow you already, check it out:) mind to follow me back?

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  16. @Celia Indriana.....
    Follwed You....

    @Joshua...Thanks..........

    @By Larissa...Thanks...

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    1. Hi love,
      You have an amazing blog!
      Gladly follow you via gfc. I would be happy if you could follow me too, of course if u'll like my blog.
      kisses,

      www.nicoleta.me

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    2. Hi Nicoleta Dear
      Thanks for such good words...do visit again.....

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  17. hey thank you so much! :)
    of course I'm gonna follow you back,
    xoxo

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  18. do you write these? they are great.

    cheers. thanks for following life in mod.

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    1. thanks for the comment camille... Yes I write them myself....
      all of these are my work only...

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  19. Thanks for letting a comment in my blog. I write poesy too and i have to say I´m really impressed with you.
    Following, hope you do the same.

    Ps: Keep writing like this :)

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