Thursday, August 9, 2012

Can't Take It Anymore


 









She looks beautiful when she pose
Though she got a big nose
I hate to tell her
That I can't be with her anymore.

I loved her to the core
Gave her what she ever thought for
Shared her tears, made her cheer
But is this what I get, I don't know
I can't take it anymore.

Me leaving her makes me sad
But I guess this is how it is to end
She be happy all her life
That’s what I prayed for.

Maybe when I will not be around
She might realize what I gave her
She might try to search for me
But I’ll be no where to be found.

This is the time for goodbye
Time for final prayer that I guess would be heard
God forgive me as I ask
Not for me but for her.


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171 comments:

  1. Edessa Marie ♥August 9, 2012 at 10:53 AM

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  21. Ashwin SinghAugust 10, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    thanks...

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    1. Ashwin SinghAugust 10, 2012 at 3:31 PM

      thanks a lot dear... would surly support your blog...

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  25. Le Stelle di TuranAugust 10, 2012 at 6:44 PM

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  26. Carolyna's worldAugust 11, 2012 at 3:21 AM

    so lovely words

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  31. Patrycja (photoopassion)August 12, 2012 at 1:37 AM

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    Nice weekend!

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  32. Natalia GutiérrezAugust 12, 2012 at 2:43 AM

    It's so nice to see people writing with the heart. Cheer up though ;)

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  35. Ashwin SinghAugust 13, 2012 at 6:01 PM

    thanks....

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    Following you back dear, i like how you write, keep doing.

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  39. María Chantal Rodríguez NilssonAugust 13, 2012 at 9:33 PM

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    I´m glad I stopped by your blog, you have some nice poems here!!!
    I don´t know if this poem in particular is based on something that actually has happen to you recently but, altough it was tough it came something beautifull of it... this poem!!

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    1. Ashwin SinghAugust 16, 2012 at 9:47 AM

      thanks a lot for visiting my blog and yes few poems are based on what has happened with me and some are on situations that i came to know..

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  45. Hannah R.August 15, 2012 at 2:51 AM

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    Very interesting posts!

    xx

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  57. Ashwin SinghAugust 17, 2012 at 11:33 AM

    thanks...

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    OK!!

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  69. Kinga OvariAugust 20, 2012 at 9:31 PM

    thanks for your sweet comment on my blog! I had already followed you! it's your turn now :)

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  71. UnknownAugust 21, 2012 at 12:43 AM

    Thank you for your comment.
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    Thanks for your comment :) Your blog is really great :)

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    Heeey thank you for your comment :) Hope you will visite my blog again...

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  74. Ashwin SinghAugust 21, 2012 at 9:54 AM

    thanks......

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    I follow you too :)

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    0h thank's you very muuch!!
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    Do the same !

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    To me, this seems sad. But it's still absolutely beautiful!

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  79. AnonymousAugust 23, 2012 at 4:49 AM

    Thank you for your comment!
    I see that you are an Indian? I too am Indian and I have african roots by my father:-D!

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    1. Ashwin SinghAugust 24, 2012 at 1:57 PM

      thanks... i dont have a facebook fan page.. but you can add me on facebook if you want.. the details are given on contact me tab...

      Delete
  80. KelseylovescosmeticsAugust 23, 2012 at 8:43 AM

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    nice work, love your expression of emotions<3
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  85. Ashwin SinghAugust 24, 2012 at 1:54 PM

    thanks....

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  86. Ashwin SinghAugust 24, 2012 at 1:55 PM

    thanks...:)

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    Thanks you for your follow :)

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    the poem is beautiful !! :)
    Love
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    that's nice:) x

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    thanks! sure :)

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  96. Caro *August 27, 2012 at 8:33 PM

    Beautiful poem :)

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  97. AnonymousAugust 28, 2012 at 5:30 AM

    loved! such a beautiful (and kind of sad) poem!
    xoxo sweetheart

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    1. Ashwin SinghAugust 30, 2012 at 10:36 AM

      thanks......and yes its sad one but keep a check for a happy one..

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  98. Ashwin SinghAugust 30, 2012 at 10:20 AM

    thanks...

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  99. Rosa BananaAugust 30, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    Oh now you're in Bloglovin, awesome!
    This one is great as well. I really think that I feel what you were feeling, writing that.

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  100. Ashwin SinghNovember 28, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    thanks....

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